Narrative Assessment - 15 Oct 2015 - Literacy

Learner: Jack             Learning Coach: Stephanie Hooker             Date: 15 Oct 2015

Learning Area: Literacy - Writing

Learning Observed

Today’s writing topic was “An underwater adventure”. Jack set to work readily and expressed his thoughts and ideas with ease.

Evidence of learning

Jack was able to write simple sentences with conjunctions. He is beginning to use adjectives in his writing.

Key Competencies/Vision Principles

Managing Self - Jack settled to work quickly Use Language, Symbols and Texts -  He is capable and writes fluently Thinking - His ideas were in sequence

Next Learning Steps

Begin to edit his work to change repetitive words (remove “and”) Use a variety of sentences Continue including descriptive words in his writing